a room
The Space.The room is bare only a chair in a corner, still warm from the woman who sat there; she wont be back. The room is silent, stuffy needs airing, a faint aroma of perfume lingers; curtain less...
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If only the walls could speak! A lovely poem Jan that captures the sadness and mystery of an empty room.'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral
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dear lewis the poem was originally 35 lines and was written two years ago when i rewrite old stuff it always get shorterjan oskar hansen
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Jan,the feel of the last person to leave the room is an excellent one. Since you tell us the chair where she sat is still warm, (I'm glad) the author must just be closing the door behind her. That at...
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oh, thanks for that information, jan, i wouldnt have thought it was about a divorce. interesting alternative title too ("the space" has a bit of a double meaning if its about two people separated,...
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